Amatan Noor

A Fish Pond Floats Below a Fire Hydrant in Bed Stuy

Brandon tells me it’s an insane hill to die on; about
puddle guardians and fish doctors; I nurse ecosystems
of lost causes. Coax anguish into blood clots, irregular
spotting; my body escapes to a fog of steam—manufactured,
expensive. Between Tompkins and Hancock is less pond and
more puddle; 150 goldfish swim in two inches of bliss

Brandon calls it lousy culture war; an absurd clash of
neighborhood archetypes. Shells coil like treasures inside the
fish pond splattered in confetti pebbles. I coil recoil implode all
summer. Leaves turn greener. Names of the dead are mourned
over megaphones. I take a plunger at the squalid; a recurring nuisance.
I cannot tell you if I am happy. Let’s name the languishing cornucopia

Reddit overflows with discourse, advise of those who
use the term aquascaping. The hydrant trickles droplets
below like petals. I grieve the wilted begonias,
home-grown peaches molding in the pantry
Here are your outbursts expected and uninhibited
Here is a repulsed gentrifier with endless resources

Thirty-six fish disappear at nightfall in a rescue mission
Brandon alleges actions of misplaced white guilt.
Says the community fridge a few blocks away stays empty
We grieve the block the fish the night all destined for ruin

The proud guardians of the fish pond nail a sign into the adjacent tree
A veterinarian labels the fish feeders for other marine animals reminding
lives worth less are sacrificed for those superior and it is justified
Speculums pry me open in a loop and my cervix wincing in pain is justified
Meanwhile, the Promenade repurposes itself a fallacy; a decade up in
smokes since I ran by. I reuse the words ovarian, geriatric at weddings, nightclubs

One fish guardian claims he built a dream from flaw,
neglect and once others meddled with their good
intentions and kind hearts for fish the size of his
pinky his ego stood guard, said,
Tell me what you remember of clinging. Of insensible gusts.
He has been holding on for dear life since that day

The fish pond pesters me to build a thing worth saving
I tell Brandon I want to create something beautiful, lasting
Something that will outlive those with
a desire to feed it to animals dormant deep inside them

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In Oaxaca I Am Mistaken as the Cleaner

A clown car of unpleasantries
emerges onto the shared rental balcony
No podemos entrar slurry from white American
mouths and thicken the air like wet cement
All nine people in the same wedding party did
was choose to leave behind nine sets of keys
and stomp into the sacred unknown of a city
like it were pillow forts they built at a sleepover
The gall of exceptionalism will make you shout
victimhood as loud as an obscenity without
ever taking notice

          I fixate. I surrender.
          Convince I did not swallow
          anyone’s spare key from the lockbox
          It begins with deflection the forgiveness
          I simmer my body against red clay floors
          I cannot pay my way
          into an unwrinkled universe
          but I witness it like a sacrifice
          Real pearls fake gold true luster
          Ring of mountains around Zapotec burials
          Those who are now entombed burrowed and
          built who infiltrate a thousand times
          over pretend not to enter

                    The resident dive bar graffiti artist
                    scribbles:
                    ln heaven he thought there should be no limits
                    and I caution to everyone in the Lower East
                    Side shrieking
                    IT WILL NEVER LOVE YOU THE SAME
                    and to myself the Chrysler building
                    will only sparkle pretty like the
                    bubbles in my glass count

                              the number of drinks
                              the percentage off the total
                              the steps taken on the
                              Manhattan bridge
                              all impediments nettled
                              on the road to harbor

                                        I want to give myself
                                        permission to endure
                                        despite the gutting
                                        betrayals that
                                        torment me despite
                                        these hauntings of life
                                        When my father’s village was plagued
                                        by cholera outbreaks they did not know
                                        the fix was to boil the
                                        drinking water but the whole
                                        village gathered and
                                        repeated prayers in unison
                                        night after night with a
                                        hankering in their hearts for
                                        a cure
                                        so you best believe
                                        I am destined to try a
                                        wrong,
                                        passionate
                                        remedy or two in
                                        this life for what
                                        is sour the way
                                        my people did
                                        back then

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Amatan Noor is a Bangladeshi writer based in Brooklyn, NY. Her poetry appears in Split This Rock, DIALOGIST, Thimble, No, Dear and elsewhere. Amatan’s work has been nominated for a pushcart prize. She is a Tin House alumnus. Amatan lives in Clinton Hill and is in an ongoing love affair with Fort Greene Park. She is the author of Not Guilty, her debut poetry collection (2023, Finishing Line Press).